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[Mhelai]

oo nga bading. yun ang papasok sa isip ko pag ginawa mo yun. iisipin kong naghihiganti ka sa kanya with that kind of story. bwehehehe! pero i love the twist.

[--suMMerfieL--]

your welcome te avon...
tska mgnda nman tlaga xa eh....

te lhai kailan yung susunod nung sayo?

[Mhelai]

i dont know mikha. pero malapit na yang matapos. wait lang ng konti. ok?

president: yung comment ko sa story mo, hehe.. next time na lang.

[Yuki]

Continuation (Sa wakas, hehehe)
THE class nila ngayon at iyon na rin ang last subject nila sa araw na iyon, pansamantalang lumabas ang teacher nila kaya naman napaka-ingay nila. Nakaupo siya sa lamesa nilang magkakaibigan at nakapangalumbaba, pinagmasdan niya ang tatlong kaibigan niya; si Anzelle, Carizza at Angeline, lahat ng mga ito ay busy sa pagbabasa ng Manga na dala ni Anzelle. Pinagmasdan niya ang cover ng Manga na binabasa ni Carizza, Gravitation ang title nito, may bigla siyang naalala.
Hinampas niya ng malakas ang table nila para makuha ang atensyon ng mga ito, “Alam nyo bang ang ganda ng legs ni Mati?”
“Ano? Legs ni Mati?” ibinaba ni Anzelle ang binabasang Manga.
“Pa’no mo nalaman?” tanong ni Carizza.
“Sinilipan mo siya nung nag-CR siya? Yuck, Mavy.” Sabi naman ni Angeline.
“Sinilipan? Hindi ‘no! Baka ikaw ang nagbabalak na silipan siya. Nakita ko lang nang itaas niya yung pants niya sa harapan ko kasi naiinitan daw siya, yun lang ‘yon.” Sabi niya.
“Yuck ka pa rin Mavy.”
“Hindi ka isang dalagang pilipina.”
“You’re a pervert!”
She gasp, “I am not a pervert! I was just appreciating his good qualities and as I see it, there’s nothing wrong with that.”
Ngumisi ang mga ito, tanda ng isa na namang bagay ang maipang-aasar ng mga ito sa kanya. Kabisado na niya ang mga gawi ng mga ito, mukhang may isa na namang maipang-aasar ang mga ito sa kanya bukod sa pagiging lampa niya at boses bata.
“P-E-R-V-E-R-T!” sabay-sabay na kantyaw ng mga ito.
“It was fully appreciation.” Depensa niya.
“Asa! Appreciaton daw. Eh si Joemer?”
“Oh, anong problema kay Joemer?” tanong niya.
“Hindi ba sinabi mo sa ‘min kaninang umaga na nung dumaan sa harap mo si Joemer naamoy mo ang pabango niya at sinabi mo sa ‘min na ang bango-bango niya?”
“Oo nga sinabi ko nga yun, so?”
“What does it feel smelling Joemer’s scent and staring at Mati’s legs?” tanong ni Angeline.
“Oh, it feels good.” Sagot niya.
Nanlaki ang mata ng mga kaibigan niya at tumawa. Siya naman ay tumitig lang sa mga ito. What’s wrong with this people? Magtatanong-tanong tapos ‘pag sinagot mo naman tatawanan ka lang, eh wala namang nakakatawa sa sagot ko.
Nang medyo mahimasmasan ay hinarap na siya ng mga ito pero halata pa rin ang pagpipigil sa pagtawa ng mga ito.
“Grabe ka Mavy,” sabi ni Angeline, “Binigyan ka na nga namin ng pagkakataon na ipagtanggol ang sarili mo.”
“Oo nga,” segunda ni Anzelle, “Pwede mo namang sabihin na Ok lang o wala lang kaso ang sagot mo ‘it feels good’?”
“Kahiya-hiya ka sa lahi nating mga kababaihang pilipina,” dinuro pa siya ni Carizza, “Hindi ganyan dapat ang inaasal ng isang dalagang pilipina sa harap ng isang lalaki, nag-aaral ka pa naman.”
“Oo nga! Tama si Carizza!”
Sinimangutan niya lang ang mga ito, talagang hindi na nagsawa ang mga ito sa pag-api sa kanya. Ok sana sa kanya kung inaasar-asar lang siya ng mga ito, kaso sinasaktan pa siya ng mga ito. Siguro nasanay na rin siya kaya minsan nararamdaman niyang hindi kumpleto ang araw niya kung hindi siya makakatikim ng hampas ni Carizza na pakiramdam mo ay lumabas na ang lungs mo, o ang hindi maubos-ubos na pang-aasar ni Anzelle talagang duduguin ka at ang mga pang-babara ni Angeline na talagang mapapa-shut up ka. Pero sa kabila ng lahat ng ito ay maaasahan niya naman ang mga ito sa lahat ng bagay, maaaring hindi vocal ang mga ito sa mga feelings ng mga ito pero in some what ways ay ipinadadama naman ng mga ito iyon sa kanya.

>>>>>waaahh......tinatamad na naman ako.....bakit ganun.....dati nagagandahan ako sa story ko, pero ngayon parang hindi na?
Hay naku, paiiksiin ko na nga lang siya......T_T

[avonski]

owkei! commercial lang...


may balak kasi kami nung barkada ko nung highschool na gumawa ng manga. i designed a character at hindi ko alam kung uubra siya as hero...eto siya:(click nyo nalang for a larger view)






pasensya na kung may kalabuan. sa camera phone ko lang kasi siya nakunan. gusto ko sanang marinig ang mga suggestions at comment nyo. maraming salamat!!^^

[--suMMerfieL--]

uhmmm....

for me pasado nman xa...

prang kahawig nya ung maestro sa pichi pichi pitch....

ano name nya???

[chiharu]

admin said:

owkei! commercial lang...


may balak kasi kami nung barkada ko nung highschool na gumawa ng manga. i designed a character at hindi ko alam kung uubra siya as hero...eto siya:(click nyo nalang for a larger view)






pasensya na kung may kalabuan. sa camera phone ko lang kasi siya nakunan. gusto ko sanang marinig ang mga suggestions at comment nyo. maraming salamat!!^^

ok siya te avs... pero I sugguest na medyo bawasan mo ung single strands. serious type ba ang guy na yan??? XD
By the way the avz... I love the story!!!

[☻cherry☺]

Apr 2, 2008 21:36:54 GMT 8 avonski said:

owkei! commercial lang...


may balak kasi kami nung barkada ko nung highschool na gumawa ng manga. i designed a character at hindi ko alam kung uubra siya as hero...eto siya:(click nyo nalang for a larger view)






pasensya na kung may kalabuan. sa camera phone ko lang kasi siya nakunan. gusto ko sanang marinig ang mga suggestions at comment nyo. maraming salamat!!^^

for me itz cool..

mahilig din kasi akoh mag drawing..

iba nga lng ang type kong i drawing..

mga wedding gowns..

(with 's' talaga?)..

jejejeje

[damoiselle24]

Hi guys pweding makasali sa mga POST ng mga PRANING...hehehe.. I also want to share my own compositions of poems..And I hope that gonna liked it guys..
(I made these poems I think last year pasensya Im not that sure..hehehe..Kasi at that time sobrang emote ang nangyari sa buhay kaya hindi ko sya ma remember..hehe.. I fall to a guy whose loved is already ain by someone..It is really painful PRAMIS..hehehe) Kaya here it goes:


(While I made this one, Ang daming tanong na nangyari sa buhay ko..hehehe)

"Dreaming"

Questions has been fleeing in my mind
Why does my heart e'er beat in the wrong person
Why I always long of an amiss love
Why do my heart whispers the name belong to others
Why can't I stop my eyes, glancing on you?
Why can't I stop my mind thinking of you?
Why do my lips longed for a kiss
Which never meant for me?

Every night I keep on dreaming of you
I dream how it feels to be wrapped by your arms
To be kissed by you
And to be next to you
Before I closed my eyes
I whisper I little prayer of hope
That you might dreamt of me
And you may recognized me one day



In my heart I hold that hope
That all my fantasies will become into reality
And my dreams would become into real one
And someday I can hold you forever
And not only in my dreams..


(While I made this one, he's really beside me.. And he doesn't have any idea na cya pala ang tinutukoy ko.. He just said na ang swerte daw ang lalaking na naging inspiration ko dito..hehehe..)
"Silent Cry of the Heart"

You sit next to me
With the eyes thats so lonely
Then I ask you Why
Without any word you just embraced me
And you said SHE LEFT ME
I'm speechless
I can't think of any soothing words
To allay your burden

I embraced you so tight
I ask myself why did she left him so easy
As I look into your weary eyes
Shadows of pain is there
Half smiling you said maybe Im not good to her

I just hold your hand and smiled at you
And said Maybe you are too good for her
You just sigh
Pain is all over in your eyes

As I stared with your nostalgic face
I wanted to tell you
How much I love you
And how painful is
Everytime you were with me
But you were talking about her

How much you love and treasured her
And why you can't see all those pains
Maybe Im just a mirror of a friend for you
Someone you can lean on to
Someone who can make you smile
Someone who will always be there when you cry

But, it will always be like this?
Loving and hoping that someday
You're gonna be mine..

[damoiselle24]

(While this one naman I made it for a very long time for almost two months I think..hehehe.. And I made this bec.. of the to0 much pain that I felt bec. he's living..)

Somewhere in Between


Tears were about to fall down
The time you walk into my world
You smiled at me and I felt so ashamed
You make my world so idyllic
Then, out of the blue all my troubles were gone
You name my tears into laughter’s

You are the reason in every smile
That sheer on my lips
You conveyed every happiness that linger with in
Unknowingly, you make this heart of mine to live again
Every day you put a life in every sense of me
Before I closed my eyes at night
I whispered a little prayer that it will last forever

But as the wind bristles from east to west
As the bees kissed in every flowers that blooms
And bequeathed them on their very eye
As the Barbara Streisand song “Some good things never last”
You suddenly flee in my arms

Tears cascade from my eyes
As I watched you walking away from me
I try to hold your hand and call your name
But you never turned at me
I tightly closed my eyes
And hope it was just a dream

But when I slowly opened my eyes
Hope to see you at my side
But you already gone
Tears keep on falling as it will never ceased
Twinge shatters my soul

Out of obliviousness, I ask questions
I yell and weep in the darkness
Melancholy enfold my bemused world
In silence I seek answers to myself
But you’re gone
And I’m left here somewhere in between

[victoria]

ayan ang kinalabasan dahil nagbalak akong maging photographer dati.. hehe... na naudlot dahil na feel ko na hindi pwede sa akin iyon.. hehe

[andieyoo02]

My thanks to Erikanicole for this because it was her anecdote that started this. Forgive me,, as this is just another product of my scattered brain, another super super amateuristic work.

The characters here are base on the Korean series ALL ABOUT EVE…


MUTUAL ADMIRATION –
‘’THE PICTURE IN THE WALLET’’


Kenneth Yin and Alan were discussing the financial reports handed in from the latter’s department.

‘I’m very impressed with these figures Alan,’ Kenneth said as he stared at the flourish of signature at the last page. That has become a habit, his staring at that signature as if by doing so; he can conjure the lovely face of the owner.

‘Trust Nicole to come up with such profound analysis. She’s a gem. Very intelligent. And she’s the kind of person who has a sweet disposition in life that people can’t resist being drawn by her charm,’ Alan said.

Kenneth shrugged his shoulders appearing uninterested but Alan was unaware that he was tracing the signature stroke with his finger.

‘Did you know that when she was about to be promoted as Financial Analyst, Judith and I had a tug-of-war over her,’ added Alan who seemed not to notice the other man’s uninterested look.

‘How come?’ Kenneth asked encouragingly.

‘Well, Judith wanted to pirate her into her Personnel Department because she feels that Ms. Zhen was her protégé. But naturally I won over her as your father saw the importance of Ms. Zhen in my department. She really has a way with figures,’ Alan said with admiration in his eyes for his assistant.

‘And a figure to match her brains, I should add,’ Kenneth grinned.

‘Be careful Kenneth with your words you might be charged with sexual harassment,’ Alan warned.

‘But I’m only saying the truth, she’s beautiful with a charming smile, intelligent and…SEXY,’ with his emphasis on the last adjective.

Alan shook his head. ‘Well I know that you don’t have a bad track record with girls, so I don’t have to warn you to keep off her. Besides she’s too young for you. Well, if we’re through I think I should go now.’

‘Ok thanks Alan for all your help and your time with this ignoramus.’ Both men laughed.

Alan was already at the door, when Kenneth asked, ‘How are things between you and Judith?’ and laughed again at Alan’s embarrassed face.

‘Don’t worry Alan, I was not born yesterday,’ his laughter followed the departing back of his friend.

At the Finance Department, Nicole Zhen was preparing to leave. After clearing her table, she took out her wallet and took out an inserted photograph from among the folds and said, ‘Would you like to go shopping with me?’ and smiled sweetly at her own foolishness. If her colleagues can see her now, they would really laugh at her. Talking to a picture, pouring out her feelings to it as if it can hear her.

She did not go out with her officemates for dinner that night. And Nicole Zhen was one of those rare career women who do not have a car. She enjoyed walking, riding in cabs or in the bus. She felt normal doing those things instead of being confined behind the steering wheel. It gives her the chance to admire the things around her, something, which she believes; she cannot do if she’s driving.

Tonight is one of those nights when she took a short walk from the company building mindless of where her feet would take her.

She felt for her wallet inside her bag and asked ‘Are you tired Senior, don’t worry we’re almost there at the mall.’ Again she giggled like a little girl at her stupidity. And the people she met can’t help smiling back at her.

Nicole went to her favorite stores, checking what’s new, buying something when she felt she needs it. She’s a very careful shopper and after deciding on the items to be bought, she allowed the salesperson to carry her purchases to the counter. It was while pulling her card from her wallet that something fell to the floor. She did not notice it, but a hand picked it up where it landed near the owner’s feet and tapped the salesperson to give the paper back to Nicole.

‘Madam you accidentally dropped this. Is he your boyfriend? He’s very handsome,’ the salesperson said with a friendly smile.

‘Oh thanks, he’s not my boyfriend, he’s my HUSBAND,’ she replied flippantly, not caring if people around her can hear what she said.

‘Then your husband is not only handsome but very attentive to you too madam,’ the salesperson said glancing beyond Nicole’s shoulder at the man standing a few feet away.

‘He is and I love him very much.’

Nicole Zhen went home that night with a big smile on her face.

The next day, Nicole, as usual, reported to the office early. She was walking along the corridor when she noticed a man turned at the far corner. Who was that, another early bird? She thought to herself. She was humming as she entered the office and the first thing she noticed was a single rose on top her table. She hurriedly opened the card, there was her name on it and initialed HY.

She sat down and tried to recall among her recent acquaintances if there was someone with that initial. She smiled, opened her bag, took out her wallet and took out the picture, ‘‘well I warn you if this one turns out to be better looking than you, I’m sorry if I will fall out of love for you.’’

She knitted her brows, pouted her lips like a little girl and said to the picture in a soft voice, ‘I’m sorry, it’s only you who is important to me. I will love you forever.’ She hurriedly returned it in her wallet when she heard voices. As expected, she was the object of her colleagues’ teasing when they saw the rose, ‘Another heart will be broken in a week’s time,’ they chorused.

At Kenneth Yin’s office that afternoon, ‘Just leave them there Erica, I’ll tackle them tomorrow.’

‘Going out shopping with Ms. Zhen?’ and seeing his secretary’s surprised look, Kenneth justified, ‘I often saw you together and assumed you are very good friends.’

Erica replied, ‘Nicole, my boyfriend Warren, and I are childhood friends.’

‘I see,’ he nodded.

‘She’s a master matchmaker, it was she who pushed me and Warren towards each other.’

‘So I assumed since she’s a good matchmaker, she’s already found her perfect match for her,’ Kenneth picked up Peter Rabbit and winked at him.

‘Nicole…Ms Zhen is NBSB,’ Erica grinned at her boss.

Kenneth raised his brows and she knew already that by that action, he wants further explanation.

‘No Boyfriend Since Birth,’ Erica wanted to imply that her friend is still free.

‘I’m sorry Mr. Yin to bore you with my blabber. I have to go now,’ and bowed slightly

When she turned she saw him holding Peter Rabbit with a foolish smile on his lips. Erica can’t help asking, ‘I hope this won’t offend Mr. Yin, but I can’t help but notice that you’re so happy nowadays.’

‘It’s love Erica,’ Kenneth blurted what was on his thoughts. Too late he has already said it. He smiled at her and she turned to leave.

Once the door was closed, he perched at the edge of the desk and asked Peter Rabbit, ‘did you hear that, NBSB?’ and laughed. Should I see a psychiatrist, he thought. He has been talking with an inanimate object for months and sometimes he fear for his sanity. Love. He shook his head and grinned.

He remembered the incident at the mall. It has never been his habit to stalk at unsuspecting females. But that night when he was about to open his car, he saw her walking. It seemed a magnet pulled him and he followed Nicole at a safe distance. He grinned remembering picking up the picture that flew off her wallet and it seemed to have a life of its own and landed near his feet. He was surprised when he picked it up and saw his face staring back at him.

‘NBSB but has a husband already,’ he winked at Peter Rabbit.

Meanwhile, at the lobby on her way out, Erica dialed Nicole’s number

‘Erica, please give my regards to Auntie,’ Nicole replied joyously.

‘Nicole, listen I don’t want to impart this to you now but Nicole he’s in love,’ she whispered.

‘Warren?’ her friend’s voice raised an octave higher.

‘No, the man of your dreams,’ Erica replied glancing around. She has already reached her car.

‘Ken….Ken…Kenneth?’ Nicole said weakly and sat in her chair. A long silence followed at her end.

‘Nicole are you alright? I’m sorry but I think the sooner you know the better. Do you want me to stay with you, have dinner perhaps? I can call Warren.’

‘Don’t worry Erica, I’m ok, go ahead they are waiting for you. Bye.’ She said with unbidden tears welling out her eyes.

Nicole slumped on her desk and cried. I love him very much, her mind shouted. She decided to go home. There in the confines of her room, she can pour her heart out and cry and cry. She was gathering her things when a figure loomed at the doorway. When she looked up, she was surprised to see the reason for her misery standing there. She bowed slightly and continued fixing her things.

‘Good evening Senior. If you want to see Alan, he has left already,’ she said in a barely audible voice.

Kenneth strained his ears to hear what she was mumbling. Was she crying, he asked? He saw her wiping her eyes when he entered. He wanted to go to her side to hug and comfort her. At that very moment, she just looked like a little girl whose toy has been taken from her not the impressive Ms Nicole Zhen. For the first time, he saw her without the signature smile on her face.

‘Nicole is there something wrong?’ he asked with a worried look on his face.

She shook her head. She could not be mistaken, but he called her by her first name. She wanted to cry more as it sounded so nice on his lips. With head bent, she excused herself and went out of the door. Please give me the strength not to cry here. Please, she bid her mind to help her.

Kenneth followed. They rode the elevator in silence. He clenched his hands to stop himself from grabbing her and comfort her from whatever it is that’s troubling her.

‘Can I offer you a ride home?’

He got no reply from her as she continued to walk hurriedly.

‘Nicole, can you tell me what’s wrong? I was offering you a ride home,’ he almost shouted with exasperation.

He grabbed her arm and asked, ‘Why are you crying Nicole?’

She bent her head ‘I just want to be alone Senior,’ she whispered. She’s having a hard time controlling her tears and she must leave before she will make a fool of herself in front of him.

He did not release her arm and asked, ‘Will you have dinner with me?’ he asked softly.

She looked up at him with tears shimmering in her eyes, ‘It’s not proper Senior,’ and seemed to be hypnotized by his eyes.

‘Why? I believe that a HUSBAND has a right to ask his wife to have dinner with him. Hmm?’ he asked in a serious tone.

Her mouth formed an ‘O’ but no sound came out. He bent his head and kissed her.

When he again looked at her, he smiled.

‘Senior, did the rose come from you? Does HY mean Husband Yin?’ she asked, the smile returning to her face.

‘You’re very intelligent indeed Ms Nicole Zhen,’ and bent again to kiss her.



END OF MUTUAL ADMIRATION.

[eun hee]

nice view vicky...

as usual tintamad akong bsahin ang nsa taas n gwa so nxt tym n ang comment ko dyn..

[andieyoo02]

Naisipan ko lang i post dito ang isa sa mga gawa ko poem...tagal na ito....

L-O-V-E

I befriend to you…
Because your amicable gestures tickled my
Then melancholic spirit, there was something
In your smile that whispered gently, into my ears,
“Let’s be friends…”

Because of that…
I liked you
Who would not? You were so thoughtful, gentle
And oh! so sweet, in everything you did and
Said to me; I began to spend sometime each day
just thinking of you.

Then…
I wanted you
To be a part of me and me a part of you
To be always at my side every minute of
My life, every beat of my heart and I asked
myself why?

Now…
I need you
In my life, no mortal being can ever be as
Wonderful as you, and I will surely perish
If you deprive me of your love.

With this…
I hopefully pray
That our love be blessed forever, so that
We can build a home of our own,
A couple of kids to rise with a dream to reach
out together in. L – O – V – E.

[thebham]

dahil walang mpglagyan
at ang pg.open ng thread ay kinatamaran
kya dito na lamang, wahehe!!!

thE bhAm! spix:

Aba, ngaun pala inyong anibersaryo?
Di ko akalain na aabot sa ganito
Inumpisahang samahan
Nabuong pagkakaibigan
Mga pamilya at mga angkan
Para sa isa’t isa ay laging andiyan
Ito sana ay tumagal pa
Para lalo tayong sumaya

Sa mga baguhan na inde ko naabutan
Sana kayo ay nasiyahan
At nakahanap ng tunay na mga kaibigan
Parating handa para kayo ay damayan

Sa lahat ng nakasama ko sa taong lumipas
Asahan ninyong dito lang ako hanggang wakas!

Maligayang Kaarawan Sangkapraningan!!!!

>non so jung ha go deun<