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[Mhelai]

GUY AT THE ENTOURAGE

BY: CEDIEYUI

Nagkalat ang mga rosas matapos yon tapunan ng mga flower girls sa isle. Ang cute tignan ng mga nakapusod na buhok ng mga ito at ang mga gowns na kulay fushia na napapalibutan ng mga adorno.
Ganun din ang suot ng mga abay na babae. Ang pagkakaiba nga lang ay pa-tube ang style ng mga gown nito.
Isa siya sa mga imbitado sa kasal na yon ng kaibigang si Ryan. Kaytagal din sigurong inintay ng kaibigan niya ang pagkakataong yon. Sa wakas nagkaroon na rin yon ng katuparan.
Isa sa pumasok sa isip ni Rose ang nakaraan nila ng groom. Kung paanong nagkaroon ng kasiyahan ang bawat nilang pagsasama. Na nauwi sa pagkakahiwalay dahil marahil hindi ipinagkaloob ng tadhana na maging sila.
Sa di kalayuan napansin niya ang isang lalaking pasilip silip sa likod. Kasama ito sa entourage dahil na rin sa suot nitong barong at ang pagkakaupo nito sa harapan na upuan.
Ang buong akala niya ay nakatingin ito sa kanya. Nakita niya ang simpleng ka-cutan nito. Meron itong magulong buhok at naglalakihang mga mata. He looks as if he stares. Yon ang napansin niya rito.
“Bagay na bagay ang groom sa bride ano?” kinikilig na hinuha ng katabi niya.
“Ah eh. Oo nga”. Pero hindi yon ang pumasok sa isip niya kundi ang lalaking yon na me magulong buhok. “Sino kaya yon? Ano kayang pangalan niya?” naibulong niya.
“Ang cute nung guy noh?” naisatinig ng kasama ng babaeng nagsalita kanina. “Hottie!” at natawa pa ito.
“Cute! Hottie!” kabuuan yon ng tumatakbo sa isip niya. Totoo yon sa parte ng lalaking groomsman ata. Di niya mawari ang sarili. Me nabubuo ba siyang atraksyon sa isang lalaking doon lang niya nakita. Imposible ata.
Nang matapos ang wedding vows nagsipuntahan ang mga kasali sa kasal sa unahan at nagpapicture. Isa ang lalaking yon na pumunta sa hulihang upuan pagkatapos noon.
Kumuha ito ng isang rosas mula sa mga bulaklak na nakalagay sa center isle. Sa kanyang pagkabigla iniabot nito iyon sa babae sa kanyang harapan. Isang babae na kasama ata ang boyfriend nitong long hair.
Nawasak noon ang buong imahinasyon niya. Yon nga lang di nawasak ang paghanga niya sa lalaking hindi niya kilala pero noon pa lang ay crush na niya.

Nasa reception na ang lahat. Buffet ang style ng kainan. Matapos magpapicture ng isa isa ang mga nasa mesa saka naman sila pipila para kumuha ng pagkain. Nauna ang mga nasa entourage. Ang mga ninong at ninang ang sumunod.
Isa siya sa mga huling nakapila dahil sa numero ng kanilang mesa. Number 26. Marami-rami rin pala ang mga dumalo, saisip niya. Dahil ang kinapapalooban ng isang mesa ay doseng katao.
Sa di kalayuan nakita ni Rose ang simpleng pagkain ni Alvin. Tama, yon ang pangalan ng lalaking yon. Nalaman niya ito dahil isa-isang pinakilala kanina ang mga entourage. Alvin Flores, pagbubuo niya sa pangalan nito.
Nakatingin siya sa salamin sa gilid ng lalaki. Nakita niya ang mga expression nito at ang mga pagtawa. Sa siguro’y mga biro ng mga kasama nito sa mesa.
Naisip ni Rose at naitanong sa sarili kung bakit di siya nakasali sa entourage. Mapapalapit pa siguro siya ng husto kay Alvin. Pero si Sheryl, ang bride kasi ang pumili ng mga abay. At siyempre pipiliin nito yung mga malapit dito.
Sa bouquet toss tinawag ang mga kadalagahan. Isa na siya sa mga iyon. May isang babaeng nakasiko sa kanya ang nakakuha ng bouquet. Sayang siya sana ang masasabing susunod na ikakasal kung nakuha lamang niya ang bouquet. “Ha, asa ka pa.” bulong ng isip niya.
Nairaos ang kasal. Masaya ang lahat. Pero di maalis sa isip niya ang mukha ni Alvin. Magkikita pa kaya sila? Sana.

....to be continued....

[Mhelai]

alangjak avon.. tapusin mo na ang story mo. ayokong magbasa hanggat di yan tapos.

ipopost ko ang ginawa ni RHOZEBIL. nahihiya raw kasi siya na ipost at ang pangit raw.. sus ginoo.. ang ganda nga e. basahin nyo nga mga lola at lolo at pakiassure ang ROSAS na ito na maganda ang gawa niya.


I Thought…
BY: RHOZEBIL


“I proposed to him and I didn’t expect that it would be the most humiliating day of my life. He laughed at me! But I won’t let him have the satisfaction of hurting me. I won’t let him see me crying. It’s the last thing I would actually do right now, cry! And so I indulged him by laughing also. Just like that, we ended up as the best of friends forever. For how long? Next thing I knew, I’m already engaged to another man. And I’m going to marry this man, today!”

Today… ahh! My wedding day! Everything’s so perfect. So right… so elegant… so unbelievably great! And yet, oh so… dull?

I’ve got no idea why am I feeling like a fool. I know everything’s just right and falling perfectly into place, yet this feeling’s telling me otherwise. Everyone’s now staring at me... oh, the bride… I could almost hear the murmurs of simple admiration and appreciation of how pretty I look right this epoch. The wedding march started to fill the air. But then… why am I hearing a sad song played over and over my head? Dizzily going with the flow, I heard somebody had just announced something like “Here comes the bride!” and everyone applauded as I walked down the aisle. I searched from the sea of faces. Lenz wasn’t anywhere at sight. Where could he possibly go? This is my wedding day for goodness’ sake! I thought we were the best of friends. I thought he would never ever let me down. I thought he would want us to spend our lives together… I thought he cherish me as much as I thought it to be… I thought he would do everything I ask, everything as I please… I thought he feels the same way I feel… I thought… yeah!

During the special occasions of my life, he never missed a thing. How could he take leaving me this way? We grew up together. We were the best buds for almost time immemorial. We had known each other the way no other people had ever known us before. And yet, could I still add that that was what I thought?

Walking down the aisle was as if the longest walk I had in my entire life before. On my peripheral vision, I saw a man waiting at the altar. I turned my eyes to him and looked straightly to his eyes. The man, Blake, I am marrying this man today. He had been courting me since we were still studying the meaning of Ichthyology, Taxonomy and the likes. He had waited for so long and so when Lenz rejected my silly proposal, Blake snatched my heart by asking me to marry him instead... Well, that was what I thought, he already had my heart. But I should have known better. Things weren’t as easy as we thought it to be. Now, I’ve come to realize that this is not what I want. I don’t intend to make both of our lives miserable.

But, isn’t this too late to realize now? I don’t want to commit another mistake that I would only regret for the rest of my life. Through the veil that almost covering my face, I tried not to break our eye-to-eye contact. I don’t know if it was my paranoid instinct or my uncanny powers of observation, but it was as if I saw a glint of sadness behind his eyes. And yet he was smiling? Oh God, it was the saddest smile I had ever seen. I’m almost half-way there when the door just beneath the altar had opened before our very eyes. Somebody had just announced, “And here comes the groom!” What the hell is going on? Lenz was there in flesh and blood! The man I was thinking about just a few seconds way back.

It was as if Jurassic years had passed before I finally got near the altar. Blake reached out to grasp my hand and brought me in front, to Lenz. Totally confused, I didn’t let go of his hand, not just yet! He smiled again and slowly took off my hand before his’. “Wish you all the best.” he said almost next thing to whisper. I turned to Lenz, my face full of confusion and… what’s this? Am I tensed or what?

Lenz… His face was beaming yet devoid of any emotion but confusion as well. Yet the wedding still pursued the way it should be. “Are you sure you want to marry me now?” That was an uncalled-for remark I had to say this very moment, but hey! I’m still not myself today! He just smiled, two cute dimples were visible on his face,”Try me?” he just winked.

Yeah... we’ll try… who knows? This time, things might have work out. And yes, this very impossible man loves me too all along…why would he go through that absurd idea in the first place if he doesn’t anyway? We’re both cunningly ridiculous really… yet we had just proved, we’re simply meant to be, aren’t we?

[Mhelai]

mukhang madrama yata ang story mo insan...

heto ang akin habang wait ko ang story mo...

alam ko, corny na naman.. sa susunod nga magpapatawa na lang ako. ang hirap palang magdrama. ngayon ko lang nalaman ang feeling ni ate che kapag nagpipilit magdrama. hehehe...


LOVE ANGEL


huminga ako ng malalim. katatapos lang naming mag-usap ng isa sa mga kaibigan ko. inihinga niya sa akin ang problema nila ng asawa niya. nasa stage na pala sila na nag-iisip ng maghiwalay dahil hindi na nila kayang pakisamahan ang isa't-isa. Ayaw man ni Hazel na mangyari iyon, di naman niya mapigilan. nangangamba kasi siya na baka kapag nagpumilit silang magsama ay mawala na ang natitira nilang pagmamahal at respeto s isa't-isa.

isa akong columnist sa isang diyaryo na nagbibigay ng advise pagdating sa pakikipagrelasyon. umaga, tanghali at gabi ay problemang pag-ibig ang kinakaharap ko. marami ngang nagsasabi na magaling akong magpayo. binansagan rin ako bilang LOVE ANGEL. pero kung magaling talaga ako, bakit hindi ko mapayuhan ang sarili ko?

tama. maski ako ay may sariling problema. labing-dalawang taon na akong umiibig sa isang taong manhid. kahit ano ang gawin ko, hindi niya pa rin ako makita bilang isang babae. maaaring pinapahalagahan niya ako. ngunit bilang kaibigan lang. lahat na ng sa tingin ko ay paraan para makalimot ay ginawa ko na. naroong lumarga ako sa ibang lugar, nakipagdate sa kung sino-sino at magconcentrate sa trabaho pero hindi ko pa rin siya makalimutan. ganito na lang ba ako habang buhay? mananatiling nasasaktan?

"Heather..."

nag-angat ako ng ulo matapos kong marinig ang pamilyar na boses na iyon. awtomatiko akong napangiti pagkakita ko kay Rommel. ang nag-iisang lalaking aking iniibig.

"Anong ginagawa mo rito? bakit ka nag-iisa?"

"Nakipag-meet kasi ako kay Hazel kanina. we were talking about her problem regarding her marriage to Genesis," wika ko.

kilala nito ang mga tinutukoy niya dahil nasa iisa lang silang barkadahan mula pa noong fourth year high school. sa katunayan, ito ang ginawang best man ni Hazel sa kasal nito kay Genesis dahil walang best friend at kapatid na lalaki si Genesis.

"So what's new?"

"Maghihiwalay na talaga sila, Rome. they were filing an annulment next week. hindi ko matanggap ang nangyayaring ito sa kanila. alam natin kung gaano kalaki ang naging sakripisyo nila para umabot sa ganito katagal ang kanilang relasyon. at saka paano ang anak nila?"

"Wala na tayong magagawa pa. lahat naman ng suporta at advise ay naibigay natin sa kanila. siguro naisip nilang ito na ang talagang solusyon sa problema. lets just pray na bago nila maifile ang annulment ay magbago ang isip nila."

nagpakawala siyang muli ng malalim na buntong-hininga. "Sana nga."

"Dont worry. malalaki na sila. alam na nila ang sa tingin nila ay makakabuti sa kanila. ang mabuting gawin natin ay damayan sila at suportahan."

ilang sandali pa ay iniba na nito ang usapan. kung anu-ano lang ang sinasabi nito. minsan ay nagpapatawa ito na binibili naman niya. ni hindi na nga nila napansin kung gaano katagal na silang nag-uusap. hindi pa nga sila titigil sa pagkukulitan kung hindi pa dumating ang isang babae. mestisa ito at mahahalata mo agad na galing ito sa mayamang pamilya.

"Honey..." anito at humalik sa mga labi ni Rommel.

honey? parang gusto niyang ihagis palabas ng restaurant ang babae. ano ang karapatan nito para halikan ang lalaking mahal niya? sino ba ito? nasagot lang ang kanyang mga katanungan ng patuloy na nagsalita ang babae.

"sorry at nalate ako. gusto ko sanang tumawag kaso lowbat na pala ang cell ko. nakalimutan ko kasing magcharge." sandali itong huminto ng makita siya. "You must be Heather. ang isa sa mga high school best friend ng honey ko. sa wakas nameet na rin kita. halos isang taon na ang relasyon namin ng honey ko pero ngayon lang kita nameet. lagi ka raw kasing busy sa trabaho at madalas na nag-a-out of town."

alanganin siyang ngumiti. may nobya na pala ang lalaki. at isang taon na ang relasyong iyon. bakit wala siyang alam? bakit hindi man lang ibinalita sa kanya ng kahit isa sa mga barkada nila? madalas niyang kausap sina Melany at Cecille. ngunit hindi nababanggit ng mga ito at tungkol rito. at ang ungas na rommel na ito...

"Heather, this is Yasmien. im sorry kung hindi ko siya nababanggit sa iyo. nakakalimutan ko kasi. madalang kasi tayong magkita kaya hindi ko na..."

guilty ang lalaki. dapat lang. dahil kung sinabi na nito ng mas maaga na may nobya na ito, baka naging mas madali sa akin ang kalimutan siya. dahil kahit ilang beses kong sinabi sa sarili ko na kalilimutan ko na siya, sa pinakailalim ng puso ko, umaasa pa rin akong mamahalin niya ako.

ang sakit-sakit. ngunit mas may sasakit pa pala roon...

"Heather, kahit ngayon lang tayo nagkita, sana naman makapunta ka sa engagement party namin ni Rommel. mamaya na iyon. kung bakit naman kasi walang sinasabi sa iyo ang lalaking ito e."

nabingi ako. parang huminto ang mundo. para ring namanhid ang aking puso. ang tanging naririnig ko lang ay ang paulit-ulit na salitang sinabi ni yasmien.

ENGAGEMENT PARTY.

gusto kong umiyak at sumigaw. bakit napaka-unfair sa akin ng mundo? ano bang naging kasalanan ko para mangyari ito?

"C-cong... Congratulations." garalgal na sabi ko at pinilit bigyan ang mga ito ng isang masayang ngiti. ngunit alam ko na lumabas na ngiwi ang aking ngiti. nagpaalam na ako sa kanila bago pa mawala ang pamamanhid ng aking puso. ayokong magmukhang kawawa sa harap ng mga ito.

paglabas ko ng restaurant ay kumawala na ang aking pinipigilang mga luha.

"Ano ngayon ang maipapayo mo sa akin?" tanong niya sa kanyang sarili. wala siyang mahanap na kasagutan at dahil roon ay umupo siya sa gilid ng restaurant habang umiiyak..

ngayon, matatawag ba talaga akong LOVE ANGEL kung hindi ko masagot ang sarili kong katanungan?

the end

;D ;Dnote: nagawa ko na rin ang point of view ni Rommel.. kaso tinatamad na akong magpost.. hehe.. next time na lang.. oo nga pala.. mga friends ko nung high school yung mga characters. hahahaha... ;D ;D

[avonski]

tapos na ba yon??^_^ what happened next???

[chiharu]

Ako din pa-epal....

Hahahahahaha

itong post kong ito, matagal na itong natago sa aking kwarto.. pero nakapost ito sa isang site... un lang... sensiya na sa grammars, tinatamad akong i-edit

--
Title: It's Not Her

They stared at each other for a long time. Silence was on between them. Her tears fell down on her face. He was speechless. He can't look into her eyes when he saw a tear from her face.

"B-but why?" she said to him. "Why didn't you tell me? Why do I have to hear it from other people?!"

"You do not need to know anything about what's going on in my life." He said it flatly. He tried to look at her but he can't do it.

She was surprised. Sadly, she brushed a tear off her face. "I-I thought that we're friends."

"You know that I want more than that." He said.

"But you know that-----"

"I KNOW THAT!" he shouted. Then there was silence again.

"So" she said sadly. "When is the wedding?"

It was a long silence. Then he said "The day after your birthday." He can't stand this anymore. It's so uncomfortable for him that they're talking about his wedding when he's supposed to be waiting for her.

She nodded. "Well, congratulations then. And best wishes to you both." He lips formed into a smile, but the sadness was still there.

"Thanks." He then looked at her, sadly.

"Well, I'm going now." she smiled again her eyes shows how sad she is. "Congratulations again." Then she turned around and started to walk away.

He called out her name. She stopped and turned around to face him. Waiting for him to say anything.

But he said nothing.

"Goodbye." She said. Then a tear fell on her eye. Then she walked away.

Somehow, they knew that it's really goodbye, to the both of them.

--
un lang po... bow

[Mhelai]

bwehehehe.. nakapost to sa skye's forum.. inilipat ko lang.. hehehe.. sana may makaappreciate kahit alam kong di kayo mahilig sa mga horror stories.

medyo proud ako dahil ito ung una kong gawang nagustuhan ng mga kaklase ko... share ko senyo. bwahahahah


THE DREAM


im so tired. making those programs in school makes my head aches so much. i put my bags on the nearest chair inside my room and lay in my bed. then, a film starts to play before my very eyes.

i saw myself in a secluded place. huge ferns and trees were seen in every direction, a gurgling river were running nearby and the scents of beautiful wild flowers were filling my nose. its a paradise! a breathtaking paradise that i only sees in painting or pictures.

someone shouted. i turn around and saw a little girl wearing a dirty white dress. she has a long black hair and chinky eyes. she is calling me.

"ate, didnt you know that this place is a private property?" she ask. i didnt answer her. i just keep on looking at her. i can sense that there is something unusual that were going to happen.

then a thought struck me. the little girl is quite familiar. she must have read my thoughts because she smiled and say, "we already met ate..."

i became numb when a memory came back to me...

one time i was driving to pangasinan with my bestfriend cecil and her cousin jen. they were exchanging stories about their experiences in high school. i remember that i laugh with them when jen told us a funny scene involving her high school bf, roman. i was laughing so hard that i forgot that i was driving.

then out of nowhere a little girl wearing a white dress appeared. i tried to stop the car but its too late. i already bump her. my friends got shock and so do i. jen and cecile got out of the car and inspected the child. cecile, a medical student feel the girl's pulse.

"lanz, she's dead..." she said calmly.

"oh my god! we killed her!" jen blurted and began to panic.

i told them to leave the child's body but they both protested. in the end of the argument, i finally got them convince. we got back to the car and i stepped on the gas, leaving the little girl's body on the ground.

in my very eyes, the little girl's beautiful face became white. her dress is covered with blood and her hair is a mess. she had a naughty smile playing in her lips.

she started to move towards me. i moved backwards and look back. i saw that i am beside a cliff. she's closer to me now. she holds my arm.

"ate, i need a companion. you killed me, so come with me."

i found my voice and shouted. " no! im sorry, it was an accident!"

"but you leave my body in the street!" the girl said angrily. then i felt myself being push. i shouted and shouted...

i felt a thug in my left side and heared my sister, cocon's voice. "ate lanz! ate lanz! wake up!"

i sighed when i realized that what happened is just a dream. when cocon ask me what is my dream all about, i narrated to her everything. then she laughed out loud.

"you are so silly, ate! you dreamed about your characters' experience in your short story". she said and walk out of my room, leaving me with a grin on my face.

"stupid!"

[Mhelai]

hanep sa simula ano? mahilig ako sa mga horror kaya ganyan ang umpisa niyan.. pero hindi horror ang isang ito. hindi ko pa nga lang alam ang ending.. bwehehehehe.. basta type na lang ako.

NOTE: KUNG MATATANDAAN NINYO YUNG STORY NINA LEILANI AT LAURENCE, DITO NINYO MALALAMAN KUNG BAKIT NAGING KATULONG ANG LOLA NINYO. HEHEHE... ANG STORY NA ITO AY ANG PINAGHALONG 'PAST AT PRESENT SCENES' NG SHORT STORY NA IYON. MARAMI KASING NAGREQUEST NG PART TWO NOON DIBA? SAKA MARAMI RING NAGTATANONG KUNG BAKIT GANOON ANG NANGYARI.. AT ANO PANG NANGYARI AFTER NG SCENE NA IYON.. MEDYO MALABO ANG SINASABI KO, PERO MAIINTINDIHAN NINYO RIN YAN KAPAG NABASA NINYO NA.. HEHE.. ENJOY READING AT SANA WAG NYO AKONG ITUHOG SA BBQ STICK.


THE CAMP


"'Lahat sila ay nagkukumahog sa pagkuha ng mga gamit nila. they're all scared. naisip pa nga ni Nilo na kung hindi sila nagjoyride at huminto sa bakanteng lote na iyon hindi sana nila magagambala ang mga ligaw na kaluluwa roon. di sana, kumpleto pa rin silang apat. nagtatakbuhan na sila palapit sa kanilang kotse nang marinig nila ang sigaw ng kaibigan nilang si Karen...

'HELP MEEEEE...'" everybody laughed when Winchester tried to mimicked a woman's voice. hindi naman pinansin ng binata ang naging reaksyon ng mga kaibigan. nagpatuloy lang ito sa pagkukwento. "Nang lumingon si Nilo, nakita niyang iniangat ng kung sino si karen sa lupa, pagkatapos ay nahindik siya sa nasaksihan..."

"Anong nakita niya? ni-rape ba ng multo si Karen?" tanong ni Joeffrey. nagtawanan ulit ang mga babae sa umpok na iyon habang si Mc Ernol at Laurence ay tumayo at ginawa ang eksenang sinabi ni Joeffrey.

"Stop it, guys," nakakunot-noong sansala ni Stephanie. "Huwag naman kayong ganyan. you're ruining the mood."

"Huwag ka namang masyadong seryoso, Steph. Ayaw mo lang na nababalewala ang honey mo e." tawanan ulit ang sumunod na narinig sa sinabing iyon ni Allan. nag-hi-five pa sina Laurence at Mc Ernol.

"Ano bang klaseng horror camping ito? nakakawalang-gana. marami kasing epal sa mundo. pwede ba akong kumuha ng martilyo para ipukpok sa ulo ng mga ito?" itinuro ni Leilani si Laurence pagkatapos ay si Mc ernol.

"Mabuti pang itigil na lang natin ang walang kwentang camping na ito at matulog na tayo," suhestiyon ni Charito na tumayo na at akmang papatayin na ang sigang ginawa nila ng pigilan ito ni Christian.

"Masyado pang maaga, honey. kung nasa manila lang tayo, kararating lang natin sa bar sa ganitong oras. at saka, nagsisimula pa lang ang kasayahan." hinalikan ng lalaki ang nobya nito.

napailing-iling na lang si Leilani nang makita nitong napahinuhod ng playboy na si Christian ang kaibigan niya. tumayo na siya at dumampot ng isang maliit na bato bago inihagis sa direksiyon ng dalawa.

"Igalang ninyo ang mga kaluluwang ligaw sa lugar na ito. mahiya kayo sa mga balat ninyo. marami kayong audience.."

"Ang sabihin mo, naiinggit ka lang," pambubuska ni Joeffrey. "Narito si Mc, pwede na siguro siyang magbigay ng first kiss mo."

"Hindi ako humahalik sa mga wierdo at di nagsusuklay paggising sa umaga." napahagalpak ng tawa ang lahat sa sinabing iyon ni Mc Ernol.

"Lalo namang hindi ako magpapahalik sa gaya mong bad breath" ganti niya sa sinabi ng hambog na lalaki.

TO BE CONTINUED...

hah.. di lang ikaw ang puedeng mag'to be continued' avon... langya kasi nageemote ang connection ko. waaah...

[Mhelai]

ayan, pede ko ng dagdagan.. wish ko lang di magemote si connection...





"Ganito na lang," singit ni Freda, ang kasintahan ni Laurence at best friend niya. sa totoo lang, hindi niya maintindihan kung paano silang naging mag-best friend nito samantalang lagi silang nag-aaway gaya ng boyfriend nito at ng hinayupak na si Mc Ernol. "Bakit hindi na lang natin daanin ito sa laro? yung dati pa rin, fencing."

"Ano naman ang magiging reward ng mananalo?" tanong ni Aisle na sa wakas ay kumalas sa pagkakalingkis kay Allan.

"hmmm.. ganito, gagawin ng matatalo ang utos ng mananalo." mabilis na sagot ni Katrina. "teka, sino ba ang maglalaban?"

"Sina Mc at Lei."

"eto ang magiging consequence ni Lei pag natalo siya, magiging katulong siya ni Mc at ng sino mang mapipili niyang makahati sa panalo for two months. bale pagsisilbihan niya ang mga iyon ng tig-iisang buwan."

"Teka, paano naman kung si Mc ang nanalo?"

"Kailangan niyang---"

"teka, teka, teka.. ako ang magsasabi ng gusto kong ipagawa sa animal na iyan pag nanalo ako. pero di ko muna sasabihin sa ngayon. call na ako sa sa sinabi ni katre. hah.. i know im going to win this battle."

tumayo na si Mc Ernol at nilapian siya. "Kung ganoon, gawin natin ang labanan bukas. maghanda ka na, leilani. you're going to be my maid, that's for sure. hmmm... alam ko na ang mga ipapagawa ko sa iyo." ngumisi pa ang bruho tapos hinawakan siya sa baba bago lumakad palayo. babalik na siguro ito sa tent ng mga lalaki. ngunit bago tuluyang makalayo ay nlingon siya nitong muli. "By the way, si Laurence nga pala ang pinipili kong maging pangalawang amo mo." kinindatan muna siya nito bago humalakhak na parang demonyo.

Bwiset kang lalaki ka... may araw ka rin. kapag nanalo ako, hindi ka na makakangiti habang nabubuhay ka sa mundong ibabaw. magiging pataba ka na lang sa lupa...

isang kalabit ang nagpalingon sa kanya sa kaliwa niya. nakita niya ang nag-aalalang si stephanie.

"Sigurado ka ba sa pinasukan mo? I know how much you hated Mc and Mikes'[laurence] guts and vice versa. baka hindi ka makatiis sa kanila dahil siguradong gagawin nilang impyerno ang buhay mo sa loob ng dalawang buwan.."

"Kasubuan na ito, Steph. alam mo namang hindi ako ang tipong umuurong sa laban diba?"

"kahit na ba alam mong maliit ang tsansa mong manalo? you know how good my cousin in fencing. at alam iyon ng barkada."

"Alam ko kung bakit iyon ang larong isinuggest ni freda. gusto niyang umurong ako. how i hate that woman.."

"But still, she's your best friend." nakangiting sabi nito.

"Puwede bang magpalit ng best friend? ikaw ang pipiliin ko."

natawa na lang ito sa sinabi niya. tinapik siya nito sa balikat. "Goodluck sis. Sana manalo ka. mas gusto kong mapahirapan mo ang pinsan ko ng matigil na ang pagiging hambog niya."

"You mean that?"

"Of course. you can count on me always. kahit anong mangyari, nandito lang ako sa likod mo. pag kailangan mo ng back-up, call me."

"Thank you.."

pagkaalis nito ay sinimulan na niya ang pag-iisip ng plano para mapabagsak ang walanghiyang pinsan nito...

TO BE CONTINUED

weeehhhh.. kamusta naman??? bukas na ang ending.. magsasaing na muna ako.

[chiharu]

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@ ninang rhozebil: shuckers ka!! Ang ganda ng work mo day!! Sobra!!! Labyu ninang!!! Mwah!!

@ master: ok iyong Love Angel master... nagkagulo lang sa tenses na ginamit... mali... point of view pala... Una kasi, 1st person ang gamit mo, then nag-iba sa ibang part... naging 3rd (ata) then balik sa 1st person iyong P.O.V iyon lang ang napansin ko.. All in all, maganda siya ^^

@ate avz: Gusto kong basahin kapag tapos na siya... para masaya di ba? Binasa ko lang ng pahapyaw pero maganda rin siya ^^

@master: Maganda iyong The Camp master!! Tsaka iyong The Dream!!!

[Mhelai]

chiharu said:

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@ master: ok iyong Love Angel master... nagkagulo lang sa tenses na ginamit... mali... point of view pala... Una kasi, 1st person ang gamit mo, then nag-iba sa ibang part... naging 3rd (ata) then balik sa 1st person iyong P.O.V iyon lang ang napansin ko.. All in all, maganda siya ^^

talaga? di ko napansin.. hehe.. ayoko ng ayusin.. tinatamad na ako e.

yung update sa kwento ko sensya na di ko pa madugtungan.. nageemote pa rin kasi connection ko.

[angeliecka]

Ahem... this is a poem made by us (aNjeLi and me phoebe)... every poem that we make has a story behind them... So this is a sad poem "sawi kung baga" the girl loves the guy so much but destiny won't permit them... The guy tried to hide his feelings for the girl because he knows that what they feel for each other is wrong.... Care to guess why they are not ment to be??? hehehehe... ^_-

~The GirL's Side....~



Lately, the streets have darkened

Standing amidst them for eternity would not matter much

The clock never seemed to move at all

There definitely is no turning back

For sure, I know this is the only way I could get my mind off you

If my case was to see you,

I have all my time in the world to give.

If my case was to say goodbye,

Then the future was no longer important...

For there ain't no destiny for me anymore.




Standing outside your door like this

Is better than having seen you opening it

What with your most unexpressive eyes

Looking forward for some unexpected visitor

Well, that absolutely wasn't me.

Can I just extend for the door and reach for you inside?

Thrust my hand deep into your chest

Hold your heart and cherish it so for forever?

But that unbearably is as impossible as seeing you smile

When it was me you're holding, when it was me you're with.




I could have been blessed having lived in the reality of you

However, the treasure in this untold fairy tale

May only be left for me to remember alone

May only be valued by one tender heart aiming to be loved by U

How lone have I already wanted to get near you?

How much lies would I have to believe that your heart is not mine?

How many pretensions should I endure just to say I don't love you any longer?

How much effort should I sacrifice not getting lost with your stares?

How long should I've been loving you?

How much conviction should I commit to say that loving you is so wrong?




My heart promise to divert my attention to someone else

Someone whom lifetime may be enough to make me happy

Someone whom affection may be mutual

Someone whom loving would be worthwhile

The coin twirls and turns either to one side

Whether it'll be heads or tails, I'll still be the one who'll lose

Because it won't matter how it feels right loving you

What matters is the fact how lifetime had placed us

We may bump onto each other

But it will only be just that until forever.




Now you opened your door for me

I'm glad to see you smile, even when your eyes don't seem so

I wanted to say goodbye to put a stop to this madness

But I guess words are a million miles away from me

It's enough for me to just stay there and stare

I couldn't let you go this easily

The moment I step in your house

I hugged you so tight for the last time, it breaks my heart so fast

The sooner I do that, the sooner I'd step away

Away from your sight, away from your heart, away from your life.










~The Guy's side...~




The cold weather matches the hollowness I'm feeling tonight

I can feel the heaven's sympathy over my empty heart

I can feel the cold wind rubbing through my skin.

And I can hear my heart's song of despair.

I only you knew

If only I told you the truth

If only I had the courage to speak

But you never knew

I never told you

And I haven't had the courage to speak.




I kept on ignoring the feelings you bluntly show

I kept on pretending I didn't hear you call my name

And pretended that I didn't see you coming

Even though I know you you did

But if only you know how hard it is for me to ignore

And pretend that you don't exist

If only you know I don't want to ignore you

That I don't want to pretend I didn't hear you calling me

Nor pretend I didn't see you

Even if every bit of my being said I did.




I wanted to see you smile

I wanted to talk to you

I wanted to hold you close

I wanted to feel your warmth

I wanted to laugh with you

I wanted to be close to you

I wanted to stay and be with you

But I know I can't

'Coz if I allowed myself to get even a little bit close

I know I don't want to stray away.





I had lots of sleepless nights just thinking of you

Stopping myself before I can call you

I know I seemed cold and distant to you

But every time I see your sad eyes looking at me

I feel guilt stuck on my throat

It took me every bit of my self control

Not to show any emotion towards you every time our eyes meet.

And every time I see you cry

Small pains of needle are piercing deep within my heart

Knowing that I'm the reason behind those tears.







I know I've caused you so much pain.

Too much That nothing can possibly ease it away.

You'll always be the first girl who made my heart beat fast.

It's just a pity that our love for each other is so right

Yet destiny won't let us be together in this lifetime.

My only regret is I haven't got a chance to tell you how I feel

Nor let you feel how much you mean to me

But eve so, I know we are not destined in this life

I know, time will come that our two restless hearts will find each other.

And when that time comes I'll never let you go.

[angeliecka]

here is the story behind the poem... ^-^

Well as I've said there is a story behind this poem... The story goes like this, The girl's name is Aljien and the guys name is Oreo. The reason behind why their love is forbidden is because they're cousins (although malayo nahh pero pinsan parin sila). Aljien love Oreo soooo much but Oreo just keeps on ignoring her, which of course hurts her feelings but still she still longs for him to notice her.... and her feelings for him, she can't stop it no matter what she does she just can't stop what she feels... Everyone within the vicinity of this two obviously know that Aljien loves the guy soooo d**n much 'coz it shows in her pretty face and the way she looks at him and adored him. But in Aljien's view Oreo doesn't care a thing about her, he doesn't even know that she has feelings for him. All Aljien know is that Oreo despise her sooo soooo much that he can't stand seeing her around... But because they're cousins and they obviously have the same common friends they always see each other is someone else's company... Specially Oreo! Aljien always sees Oreo with pixel Oreo's girl best friend, and every time she sees them both she gets jealous of the attention that Oreo is giving pixel...'Coz how she longed to be in that position but she know she can't, she always say to herself "Why is he d**n so cold towards me???!!!" but her question was never answered... Not until her wedding day that is.... After Aljien and her husband exchanged their wedding vows, Oreo approached her with a smile on his face... He hugged her and whispered to her
ears, "I'm glad to see you happy, I also want you to know that I've been loving you for so long! Best wishes..." when Aljien looked Oreo's face she could still see him smiling but that smile didn't reached his eyes... Then he turned and walk out in her life forever.... In Oreo's part, I know he said there in the poem that he regrets not telling Aljien that he loves her, and that Aljien never knew his feelings for her. That's true he regretted that he never told Aljien of his feelings before she got married and Aljien doesn't know of his feelings for her not until she got married. You see readers Oreo also loved Aljien but he's just controlling what he is feeling because he knows it's not right to feel that way towards his cousin. That's why he Kept his feeling towards Aljien and pretended that he doesn't give a d**n thing about her, but deep inside his heart is screaming to give her attention and show her that he cares...

wehehhe i know it might sound weird but hey there is another poem... and that poem is about the guy algein married... i'll just post it here... ^-^ happy reading...

[chiharu]

uhm.... hehehe... manggagaya ako ng eksena... bwahahahaha!!!!

May short story din akong ginawa pero English format... masyado akong maka-english ngayon kasi hinahasa ko ang aking sarili sa English kaya pagpasensiyahan niyo na muna ang format chuva ko.. hehehe

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Title: An Affair of Forever

Wearing a jacket, Aileen walked her way home. She bought some supplies from the convenience store to consume for two weeks. Living alone inside a small pension house was kind of comfortable for her. For all she could care about was to clean the house and live there all by herself. No noise, no nuisance. A peaceful home.

Upon walking home, she saw a man lying in the street. Without knowing what would happen to her, she rushed to the man.

“Mister, mister.” She lightly slapped his face until she heard a groan from the man. “Are you alright, mister?”

The man slowly opened his eyes. She saw the color of his eyes was a little different from what she usually sees from other people. It was green. And the green eyed-man tried to focus his gaze to her. “W-what am I doing here?”

“You collapsed right here in the street.” She gave a sigh of relief. “Thank goodness you’re not dead."

“Oh yeah, I collapsed.” The man said almost to himself.

“What happened to you?” she asked. “Are you mugged?”

“Me mugged?” he asked unbelievably.

“Well, you’re not a kind of guy that would live here. I mean, you know, you look like you own a company or something.”

She explained. “Well, I think you’re already fine now. So, I better go home. It’s already late. You do the same too.” She stood up but the man held her wrist. “What?”

“Where do you think you’re going?”

“Uh. Home?” she said as a-matter-of-fact.

“You’re leaving me behind?”

“As I can see, you can manage on your own now. So would you—”

“No. Since you helped me, you better do it to the fullest.” He said strongly.

“You’re kidding right?” She asked. “I have no responsibility of you whatsoever.”

“You already have the responsibility since you woke me up.”

He grinned.

She would admit, he has a point. “Alright. Come with me.” She helped the man stood up. And they went to her pension house.


To Be Continued....
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Waaah!!! Super sorry!!! Huhuhuhuhu..... Pakiramdam ko tuloy parang ewan itong gawa ko... anyways... abangan niyo na lang (kung type niyo) iyong kasunod nito... iyon ay kung nasa mood akong ipagpatuloy to... Bwahahahahaha!!!

[Mhelai]

heres the continuation. xenxa na sa ilang mispelled words. pakiinform na lang ako sa mga tamang spelling nang mai-correct ko.



LEILANI is sweating and panting. Napahiga siya sa lupa dahil sa malakas na impact ng ginawang pag-atake ni Mc Ernol. nakita niya ang kanyang humagis na sandatang kahoy sa kanyang tabi. Nang akmang kukunin niya iyon upang makaatakeng muli ay naunahan siya ni Mc Ernol at idinikit nito ang dulo ng sandata nito sa kanyang leeg.

"Touche..."

She heared Christian's voice announcing the winner. Nanghihinang pumikit na lang siya habang nakahiga pa rin sa lupa. idinipa niya ang kanyang mga kamay at mahinang umusal ng panalangin sa maykapal.

I'm doomed sa isip-isip niya. siguradong pinagtatawanan na siya ng mga hinayupak na magiging amo niya. hindi nga siya nagkamali nang marinig ang boses ni Laurence.

"Hey, Lei.. sino ang una mong pagsisilbihan?" she saw the haughty smile broke into his face the moment she opened her eyes.

lumapit si Mc Ernol sa tabi ni laurence at nakangiting namaywang. "Well?"

nagpalipat-lipat ang kanyang tingin sa mga ito ng ilang beses. then she settled her eyes on Mc Ernol.

"Hmm... magaling kang pumili, Leilani." nakangiting sabi nito at kinindatan pa siya. isang simangot lang ang ibinigay niya rito at hindi siya nagsalita. "Oh, dont be a spoilsport, Lei. mabait akong amo. im sure mag-eenjoy ka sa buong duration ng pagsisilbi mo sa akin."

I doubt it sabi niya sa isip.

nagpatuloy ito sa pagsasalita. "magsisimula ka na bukas. ibibigay ko sa iyo ang magiging schedule mo mamayang gab---"

"Im sorry, Mr. Epal, hindi ikaw ang dapat na magmonologue diyan, dahil hindi ikaw ang napili kong unang pagsilbihan." mariing putol niya sa sinasabi nito.

"Akala ko ba...?"

"Akala mo lang iyon. Si Mike ang napili ko." tumayo siya at ikinawit niya ang kanyang kamay sa isang braso ni Laurence.

"Hoy.. bawal ang hawak.." Agaw ni Freda.

binalingan niya ang impakta niyang best friend. "Dont worry Fred, hindi ko aagawin si Mike sa iyo. hindi namin type ang isa't-isa." tiningala niya si Mike at binigyan niya ng matamis na ngiti. "Hindi ba, Mike?" binigyan lang siya ng nagdududang tingin ng lalaki.

binalewala niya iyon at nakangiting sinulyapan niya ang lahat ng kanyang mga kaibigan. sa isip ay binubuo na niya ang plano para makawala siya sa galamay ni Laurence, ang una niyang halimaw na boss.

you better watch and Learn...

THE END






dito nagtatapos ang kwento ng THE CAMP.. hehe.. medyo bitin pa rin ano? yung kasunod niya ay nasa isa pang kwento. bwehehehe.. naging series na rin ata ito.. next time ko na ipopost dahil gagamitin ni Maricon ang PC.

[cedieyui]

Chapter 1: Adrian Lorenzo and Ana Alfonso's Story by: Cedie

I wanna believe it’s love this time
I wanna believe my hearts not telling me a lie
I wanna believe it’s love…
I wanna believe my hearts not telling me a lie
But with you I can’t deny if I believe in paradise I swear
I’m there… I’m there…
If I believe

She addresses the audience as the music dies.
A pair of brown eyes was looking deeper in her soul. As she sang the song.
And when she stepped down the stage that same pair of eyes made it through the door she walked into.
“Ang galing talagang kumanta ni Ana Alfonso no? Feel na feel niya yung kanta. They say last gig na niya nitong gabing ito.”
At nang marinig yon mabilisan niyang tinakbo ang labas ng bar.
Pabiling-biling siya para hanapin ang dalaga ngunit kahit ang dulo ng silver gown nito ay di na niya nakita.
“d**n! Another girl to pass me by.”

Paggising niya kinabukasan laman pa rin ng isip niya ang malamyos na tinig ng dalaga. Kung paano nito bigyang-buhay ang mga nota ng awiting kinakanta nito.
Where in the world are you now, Ana?

Habang nagsho-shower unti-unting nilunod niya ang pagkaalala sa dalagang makailang beses na ninais niyang makilala ngunit pinigilan niya ang sarili.
Tumagal ang mga araw. At dumaan ang mga oras.

“Bro, ikakasal na ako sa wakas nakilala ko na ang babaeng para sa akin”, masayang deklarasyon ng Kuya Adam niya.
“Diba matagal mo ng kilala si Cedie, Kuya?”
“Ah oo nga. Pero all the same siya na ang babaeng para sa akin.”
“Good for you.”
“Do I sense sarcasm in your voice? Akala ko sa ating tatlo ikaw ang hopeless romantic?”
“Sus, ang baduy”, iiling-iling na sabi niya.
“I stand corrected.”
“O sige na, congrats na sa iyo. Sana magtagal ang kaligayahan mo.”
“Wait. Aren’t you gonna ask me kung pwede kitang pakilala sa isa sa mga friends ng to-be wife ko?”
“Are you asking me or are you suggesting?”
“Hehe. You got me there. Natanong lang kasi nila sa akin kung me bachelor pa akong kapatid and since tali na si Kuya Anthony I’m guessing that would be you.”
“Tantanan mo nga ako, bro. Tapos na ako sa part nay an. Alam mo naman na ang tingin ko lang sa mga babae ay passers by.”
“Baka magsisi ka, cute ang mga kaibigan ni Cedie.”
“Bahala ka na nga. Sige bye na.” Saka niya lang nakilala ang baduy na side ng Kuya Adam niya ng makilala nito si Cedie. Dati kasi ito ang numero unong cynic pagdating sa mga relasyon.
Simula ng mawala sa paningin niya si Ana ay nawala na rin ang interes niya sa opposite sex. Para sa kanya ito na ang huling babae na dadaan sa buhay niya. Ang huling babaeng nagustuhan niya sa malayo at hinangaan ng husto dahil sa taglay nitong talento.
Siguro kung ipapakilala siya ng Kuya niya sa mga kaibigan ng magiging asawa nito ay magiging friendly siya. Pero hanggang don na lang siguro yon.

to be continued...