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Post by janna101 on Dec 21, 2008 13:46:50 GMT 8
Hi! I'm Janna, 15 years old, and loves to write...
Uy seryoso ba!?!? Joke lang !!!! Hi Hi! sa lahat!!! Ngayon ko lang nalaman na may thread pa lang ganito sa hive, dun kasi ako sa board madalas tumambay, sa may cafe helenas board...
Gumawa ako ng thread na ganito kasi, una sa lahat, gusto ko maishare sa lahat ang nararamdaman ko sa paligid ko, pati na rin nararamdaman ko........
Gumagawa po ako ng mga tula, at short stories, minsan din, nanghihingi ng ideas para sa mga future masterpieces ko...
At higit sa lahat, hinihintay ko talaga si Ate che, siguro mag hi lang siya sa akin hihimatayin na talaga ako sa sobrang tuwa!!!
So , sit back, read and relax and enjoy reading!!
Dont forget to give comments, suggestions, violent reactions, good karmas and kudos points!!1
kung gusto niyo rin po magbigay ng donasyon, abuloy, solicits, pamasko, pambagong taon, pang chinese new year, pambili ng lapis, papel, bolpen, pang jolibeee, macdo, kfc, starbucks, crispy creme, pinaglumaan na tissue ay welcome na welcome po iyan !!!!
Kung gusto niyo rin po magpagawa ng tula, okay rin po sa akin yun, bigay niyo lang po ako ng topic....
YUN LANG!!!!!!! HEHEHEHEH!!!!
COCOA LOVE!!!
JANNA xoxoxo
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Post by janna101 on Dec 21, 2008 19:39:32 GMT 8
Heartstrings
Janna Uy
If the starless sky, will I see tonight, I will not
Be afraid, for you left a part of your dream to me.
You never knew, during the shadow of times,
I would remember your smile so warmth,
That brings the sun in my life. ,
I won’t see a moon tonight, for I’ll sleep while I curl
Up on your side, drifting with you forever.
Saving your hands for me, holding me near reached
Infinity.
I flew, with you, having a thought of never coming back,
It’s just me and you, with the world as our haven,
With wings in full sync, my love, we’re invincible.
You pulled my heartstring connecting to yours,
Brought a tiny nudge on my soul,
A little warmth, a love to grow..
Saving precious moments with you, as the galaxy,
Drifts us away from reality, waking us up,
Seeing your face fade away
Making us drew apart.
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Post by janna101 on Dec 21, 2008 20:21:10 GMT 8
Cherry Blossoms (Sasuke/boy version)
Janna Uy
I saw you, walking at the bridge,
Snow covered the streets,
And cherry blossoms in full bloom.
You smiled at me, I smiled back,
I ran towards you to give you an embrace.
You hug back as you giggle in delight.
I look at your eyes, those eyes,
pink pools of inviting tenderness,
It’s enchanting and breathtaking.
We stroll along the snowy road,
Side by side we felt,
Every presence we could muster.
You whispered in my ear,
The tenderest words I ever heard.
You said you love me, We felt the same.
I whispered, you’re my light,
The sanest decision I ever made,
You’re my calm… My sunrise.
Cherry blossoms fall into your head,
I laughed and put them in your ear,
How beautiful you are.
Our hands intertwined,
I opened my eyes,
It was only a dream.
When I turn around on the other side,
I saw you on my bed, beside me,
Making you mine.
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Post by janna101 on Dec 21, 2008 20:24:47 GMT 8
Sweet Paradise (Sakura/Girl’s version)
Janna Uy
As I walk the snowy streets,
I can see you from afar,
Suddenly my heart starts beating crazily.
I smiled at you, You smiled back,
Running as fast as you can,
Letting me feel your warm embrace.
You look into my eyes,
Those onyx pools with tender thoughts,
I felt secured.
We walk along the snowy road,
Side by side we felt,
Every presence we could muster.
I whispered in your ear,
“Wholeheartedly I love you”,
I knew you felt the same too.
You whispered those words,
That gave me the chills,
You’re my sunset and a new beginning.
I took a glimpse of you,
As you put a cherry blossom in my ear,
How perfect you are.
Our hands intertwined,
As I woke up,
It’s just my sweet paradise.
When I opened my eyes,
I saw you smiling at me,
I know , I’m yours.
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Post by janna101 on Dec 21, 2008 20:41:00 GMT 8
My sunshine
Janna Uy
A sound of laughter fills the room,
Why I lay down beside you,
Looking in your eyes does wonders,
It’s you and me with the daylight.
You held me tight,
You brought me close,
As we walk at the sea side,
Your whispers felt so right.
Your voice that’s soothing in my ears,
Calms the storm inside of me,
No shadow hinders our love,
As we face the path of reality.
I am your star,
You’re the palette of my night sky,
Together we’re invincible,
It’s you and me with the daylight.
Right now, we lay side by side,
And watch the galaxy pass on our eyes,
Holding each other and never let go,
Baby you’re my daylight.
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Post by janna101 on Dec 21, 2008 21:13:37 GMT 8
eto yung poem na gawa ko kanina sa loob ng banyo...heheheh free verse ang poem na ito..
para ito sa inyo
Nostalgia
Janna Uy
remembering the past aches so much,
it's not that long ago, where we thought.
We're star crossed lovers , on another galaxy,
quoting each other with cosmic nothings.
We lie down on the grass, watching the stars,
naming each one the child of our own.
We're weaving dreams , making sonnets, I
still remember the heaven we've found...
We were in Euphoria i dare say.
Until dark clouds come between us.
I thought we're inseperable,
I was wrong.
It's getting colder and colder,
it shivers up to my bones.
I can feel that you're floating
away......far away....
I cried, rivers that bittered my misery.
Seas that should end my loneliness...
but still.......
i can feel the pain....
slashing in my heart...
Until now, our laughs haunts me ....
even in my dreams....
I see those memories of ours....
those cloud like feeling.........
it would'nt fade away....
hahahaha!! ang seryoso ko naman naiiyak ako sa sarili kong gawa....sana may makarelate dyan....
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Post by ireshrie on Dec 22, 2008 16:30:33 GMT 8
..wow..ang saya naman janna..
di pa ako nakakabasa ng poems na gawa mo..ngaun palang
gumagawa ako ng english poem..pero mas trip ko ang filipino(di tagalog ok??mali un)
..parang mas tagos kasi ang filipino kesa english..pero mas sossy pakinggan ang english..
ang ganda naman nyan hija...
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Post by janna101 on Dec 22, 2008 19:25:40 GMT 8
Siguro ate resh, iba iba ang point of view ng mga writers and poets na gaya natin...siguro kasi ate, kinalakihan ko ang english dito sa bahay namin, ako lang ang nagtatagalog .. saka nanay ko... kaya mas nakakatama ako ng tao pag english poem ang medium ko. kagaya rin sa iyo filipino...
Pero ate dare ko sa iyo (pati na rin sa akin!!) na magpalit tayo ng lengguwahe!! , so isang tula sa iyo english, gawa ako ng tula pero tagalog, para mas makilala natin ang writing styles natin..
Reply ka na lang ulit kung payag ka sa challenge ko para sa ating dalawa
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Post by janna101 on Dec 22, 2008 19:28:00 GMT 8
Sunday Boulevard
Janna Uy
I walked the streets of Sunday Boulevard,
As I reached your hand to touch mine,
Only to find out you weren’t there.
Tears ran into my cheeks,
Cold bitter wind embraces me,
As darkness swallowed Sunday Boulevard.
I just stood there, waiting.
Waiting for someone that I love,
But he never came in the rain.
I just stood there, crying.
When can I erase the dreams you gave me,
The warmth you surrounded me,
The caress you bestowed upon me?
The tempest is at hand,
I had nowhere to go but lies.
Curse the lips of the Gods,
You were never mine.
As I left Sunday Boulevard,
I left a scar, and your scar
We’re just another story that’s been told.
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Post by ireshrie on Dec 24, 2008 17:31:57 GMT 8
Siguro ate resh, iba iba ang point of view ng mga writers and poets na gaya natin...siguro kasi ate, kinalakihan ko ang english dito sa bahay namin, ako lang ang nagtatagalog .. saka nanay ko... kaya mas nakakatama ako ng tao pag english poem ang medium ko. kagaya rin sa iyo filipino... Pero ate dare ko sa iyo (pati na rin sa akin!!) na magpalit tayo ng lengguwahe!! , so isang tula sa iyo english, gawa ako ng tula pero tagalog, para mas makilala natin ang writing styles natin.. Reply ka na lang ulit kung payag ka sa challenge ko para sa ating dalawa 00 ba... post ko nalang dito kailangan bang brand new?? hehehe ...may collection kasi ako eh... tama ka diyan pag english kasi di masyadong binabasa ng mga tamad kong classmate... mas gusto daw nilang tagalog... **feeling ko ang tanda ko na...eh 16 palang ako.. anong year mo na nga janna?? |
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Post by janna101 on Dec 24, 2008 20:24:03 GMT 8
Anu ka ba teh resh, 15 ako..... mas matanda ka sa akin ng 1 taon, sus di pa matanda yun heheh
Daya ate, dapat brand new
kaw na bahala sa topic
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Post by ireshrie on Dec 25, 2008 1:13:31 GMT 8
Siguro ate resh, iba iba ang point of view ng mga writers and poets na gaya natin...siguro kasi ate, kinalakihan ko ang english dito sa bahay namin, ako lang ang nagtatagalog .. saka nanay ko... kaya mas nakakatama ako ng tao pag english poem ang medium ko. kagaya rin sa iyo filipino... Pero ate dare ko sa iyo (pati na rin sa akin!!) na magpalit tayo ng lengguwahe!! , so isang tula sa iyo english, gawa ako ng tula pero tagalog, para mas makilala natin ang writing styles natin.. Reply ka na lang ulit kung payag ka sa challenge ko para sa ating dalawa YOU Loneliness envelopes me Sadness embraces me NO one care for me All alone,that's me Until I have seen your face YOu initially put my mind in maze WIth just one of your gaze You put my empty heart in craze I try to keep my distance Because my heart seems had low resistance Near you I can't think properly Near you makes me just ordinary BUt how can I get over you? If my heart speaks only you? How can I go away? If there's you blocking my way {by reish chan}  |
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Post by ireshrie on Dec 25, 2008 1:18:54 GMT 8
I dont know
I dont know where can I found it,
I dont know why I have to feel it,
I dont know when will be that date,
I dont know who will be my heart's mate.
Its hard to know who will be,
The one who will complete me.
Its hard to wait for that one.
Is he trully will come?
WHo will be this man for me?
Is he a man close to me?
A man who hates me?
Or the man who's willing to give all to please me.
{by reish chan}-->yan muna...next time nalang..makikipost na rin ako dito ha..
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Post by ☻cherry☺ on Dec 28, 2008 2:50:18 GMT 8
ANU YAN??
nag papaligsahan kaung dalawa ng poem??
hahaha
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Post by ireshrie on Dec 29, 2008 16:10:37 GMT 8
ANU YAN?? nag papaligsahan kaung dalawa ng poem?? hahaha MEDYO..NABASA MO UNG DARE TE CHERRY?? GANYAN TALAGA ANG MGA TENSAI EH HEHEHE.. |
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